Your model is really cute. The title chose works well with her free spirit attitude. The clothes colours match not only the subject but also the background. The framing of the picture is good, the subject it's centered but it works well for a portrait. I don't like the shadows in this portrait. I think her face is pale (it looks a bit unnatural) compared with the background.
This is the feedback frenzy contest 2 This is a really good photography, because the way the girl is posing and the way she is resting her arms on the board is really good. Also the background and the way it contrasting to the clothes of the girl really bring the girl to stand out and this what make this a truly excellent piece. Also the picture that were taken was taken in a good spot to make this a good picture anyway. I can see that you probably use a really good camera to take this picture, because it came out really good. Plus the clothes that girl is wearing fit for her kind of personality that signified a happy and playful personality.